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T O P I C R E V I E Wwhitewitch111I don't know what to call this, but here it is;Sometimes I do believe that the sky will fall,Because my heart is my ending,Death is like neither heaven nor hell,It is simply a release,Of all happiness and pain,Eat my body away, maggots of the earth,Carry me away angels of the midnight,For now I am a corpse,So cold and so lifeless,And ghost so hauntingly flightless,PearltyDeep and complex I read it reversed from the last line to the first line as well, and its meanings are exquisite either way. I love the multi-layering in poems like this! mirage29Pearlty! Thanks for pointing that out! How remarkable..... whitewitch111! So good to see you posting your work again! This poem is cool, graphic. I like it. whitewitch111Thank you so much pearlty and mirage!
Sometimes I do believe that the sky will fall,Because my heart is my ending,Death is like neither heaven nor hell,It is simply a release,Of all happiness and pain,Eat my body away, maggots of the earth,Carry me away angels of the midnight,For now I am a corpse,So cold and so lifeless,And ghost so hauntingly flightless,
whitewitch111! So good to see you posting your work again! This poem is cool, graphic. I like it.
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